Wikipedia contribution: Babylon 5’s Londo Mollari

Posted on May 7, 2008 by zhugeliang.
Categories: Uncategorized.



I was reading the wikipedia page on the character Londo Mollari and noticed that, while informative, the page suffered from some bad grammar and wording.  I took the liberty of fixing it up a little, though its going to need a lot more work than simply a clean-up to bring it up to speed (some of the paragraphs jump between different tenses, clauses hang in various places, and the piece is in general just not written very well).  I hope to go back sometime later and clean it up, though with my relative ameteurish knowledge of wikipedia editing techniques that effort might take some time.

-Z

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